老师这是我的论文,希望您有时间审阅一下英语怎么说
Global warming is becoming a major issues of common human Human various kinds of activitiesGreenhouse gas emissions directly or indirectly lead to global warming， meanwhile， human survival environmentFacing severe tests， As a result， humans have to seriously economic development and climate change Low carbon byJiqing was proved to be controlled human emissions of greenhouse gases， and the effective way of low carbon tourism as a global climate change under the background of the development of tourism response low-carbon economy by means of wide attention of all social sectors， the development of low carbon tour become government， industrial and tourists hot debate Based on low carbon， low carbon economy， low carbon tourism and other related theory was analyzed on the basis of yuxi in tourism low carbonation in the process of development situation and existing problems of various development， combined with low carbon tourism favourable conditions and conditions， from yuxi development low carbon tourism significance of yuxi， for low carbon tourism development has put forward some countermeasures and Suggestions
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Global warming is becoming a major issues of common human Human various kinds of activities Greenhouse gas emissions directly or indirectly lead to global warming， meanwhile， human survival environment Facing severe tests， As a result， humans have to seriously economic development and climate change Low carbon by Jiqing was proved to be controlled human emissions of greenhouse gases， and the effective way of low carbon tourism as a global climate change under the background of the development of tourism response low-carbon economy by means of wide attention of all social sectors， the development of low carbon tour become government， industrial and tourists hot debate Based on low carbon， low carbon economy， low carbon tourism and other related theory was analyzed on the basis of yuxi in tourism low carbonation in the process of development situation and existing problems of various development， combined with low carbon tourism favourable conditions and conditions， from yuxi development low carbon tourism significance of yuxi， for low carbon tourism development has put forward some countermeasures and Suggestions 行不
abstract:this we have acquired some basic knowldge of medicine through Instruction of MThe medicine is instructed mainly by modern chemistry
老师这是我的论文,希望您有时间审阅一下英语
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老师这是我的论文,希望您有时间审阅一下英文怎么说
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Meek son of Shangguan lifetime twists and turns， springs from noble ancestors but not having become a member of imperial court for the slave， fourteen-year-old appoints for the government official， exercise the Yu Wu queen and be hit by the Zong period ， of not having a prime minister， but， have reality of prime minister ， two dynasty to monopolize all the praises ， weigh land under Get volts in the political struggle， in complex and volatile politics incident， still， the meek son of Shangguan is difficult to succeed in escaping fatalistic that the fate is compared to ， dies a violent death ultimately between traveling each edge Yu political groupings， within supreme feudalist society of imperial The meek son of Shangguan is one of representative of the Tang Dynasty female Her poetry and song form is unitary since the bag restricts， only has the boudoir resentment expressing emotion and visiting a garden writing two kinds upon the emperor's She carries out creation， and reforms FOAK unceasingly above the basis inheriting " the Shangguan body's" ， talent and politics making use of self literature affect the activity choosing talented person ， organizing literature ， lead a poet stepping off imperial court， do not write poetry and song creation upon the emperor's order in the imperial court who rigidly adheres to tradition， the type ， the literature expanding having enriched poetry and song have affected ， meteorological phenomena has made for realizing popular magnificent grand Tang
Dear Mr/Ms（根据老师的性别选择，Mr对应男老师，并加上姓氏，比如Mr 李），this is my
老师这是我的论文,希望您有时间审阅一下英文
说明1）保证人工翻译；2）里面的Dr是博士，如果称教授，应该是professor，具体请楼主自己掌握感谢D Ra对我的论文的指导， 在他的帮助下， 我的论文才得以顺利完成。D Ra是在我这16年求学生涯中遇到的最好的一位老师。D Ra首先针对我的数学基础和能力，确定了我的毕业论文的题目和研究目标和方法，并尽快让我了解了相关的理论知识。老师在模型设计，数据模拟及论文撰写及修改的过程中都给予了我悉心的指导和帮助。感谢D Ra 对我的宽容，关心和随和。我的英语口语和听力不是很好，在每次和老师交流过程中，他总是很耐心的解答我的疑问，并把特别要注意的事项不厌其烦地用笔写下来。每次审阅我的论文之后，总是以鼓励和宽容的心态指出论文的不足之处，给出解决的办法。D Ra在放假期间，仍然十分关心着我的论文进度。Thanks for D Ra’s guidance to my It is due to his guidance， my thesis has been completed D Ra is the best teacher I have ever met during my 16 years of studying D Ra first depends on my mathematical foundation and ability to identify the subject， research objectives and methods for my graduation thesis， and let me know as soon as possible the relevant theoretical He has given my careful guidance and help during the whole process of model design， data simulation， and thesis writing and Thanks for D Ra’s tolerance， care and easygoing on My English speaking and listening skills are not very good， whenever communicating with him he always answered my questions patiently and wrote down the matters needing attention not mind taking the Every time after reviewing my drift of thesis， he always pointed out the inadequacies of the thesis in encouraging and tolerant attitude， proposed D Ra was still very concerned about the progress of my thesis even during 感谢D Sa 在Ra老师出差的时候，也表达了对我论文写作进度的关心。 I would like to express my thanks to D Sa for his concern about the progress of my thesis during Teacher Ra’s leaving for 感谢 D Ti 等在我用Matlab 程序对模型进行模拟时提供的帮助。感谢 Ma 女士对我论文中语法、用词等错误的修改。Thanks to DTi， for their help provided in the process when I used Matlab to simulate the Thanks to Miss Ma for her modification on the errors of my thesis in grammar and 另外，我非常感谢K教授给了我这次继续留学深造的机会。我的雅思成绩只有6分，而且我本科学的是会计学，数学基础不是很好，K 教授仍然发给了我无条件录取通知书。Besides I am very grateful to Professor K for his giving me the opportunity to further study My IELTS score is 6 points only， and my major in the undergraduate stage is Accounting， math is not very good， but Professor K still issues an unconditional admittance letter to 感谢在KK 大学这一年学习过程中所有教授我课程的老师，特别是 D PP， Dr， LL，我前面课程的平均成绩超过了70分，离不开你们用心的教授。I would like to thank all the teachers who taught me in various courses during the past one year in KK University， especially DPP and DLL My average result of previous courses is more than 70 score it is attributed in your careful 我也非常感谢我的父母和弟弟对我留学的支持。I also fell very grateful to my parents and younger brother for their support to my study 最后，向在百忙之中评审本文的各位老师表示由衷的感谢。Finally， please allow me to express my thanks to all the teachers who reviewed this thesis in their busy These sentences have been authorized to G An to be used in the Acknowledgment part of his graduation thesis
回复楼下“老师” 哼， 你天天叫我们复习，有完没完啊？！ 今天光抄1~6册的成语就写到11多点，懒
硬要说的话就是有些啰嗦了，斧正就是请别人修改文章，而后面又说请您批评指正，但语病是没有的
abstract:this we have acquired some basic knowldge of medicine through Instruction of MThe medicine is instructed mainly by modern chemistry
老师这是我的论文,希望您有时间审阅一下英语作文
很不错！坚持，但需要多用点高级词汇。
你们老师给你改的差不多了啊，作文的问题出在没有主语
很多缺乏主语，部分语法不通
第二段 第三段写的不错，第一段看着别扭， 读着不顺畅， 我建议你多看看高考的满分作文， 作文不在于用了多少复杂的语法 ， 关键在于流畅， 第一段第一句我看着比较别扭 ，有故意词组， 语法的拼凑 。高考作文比较容易，关键是重视转折词的运用，起到衔接作用，但是这些副词不能乱用，而且一篇小作文不要出现重复的词或者句型。另外注意超过二十个词扣2分！！切记。还有一些比较不常见的词组的意思和句型，最好不要用。 Indeed， being polite， especially using polite words in everyday life， has some magic power这句 我就别扭你直接开头一个Indeed，后面还用了个 especially using polite words in everyday life 这句很有毛病 还不如直接Being polite in everyday life， has some magic power。另外 Not only does it enhance our friendship and better 这个better让我看着郁闷。。开头不好 后面不错 作文主要看开头，建议你多看记一些名句~字体写好一点。。。另外祝你成功