老师这是我的论文初稿您有空的时候能
可以说老师我现在来交论文了，里面有什么不清楚的地方，还请老师多多指点。
老师，论文写好了，已经多次修订，但是能力有限，难以再进一步。恳请老师指点迷津，谢谢
硬要说的话就是有些啰嗦了，斧正就是请别人修改文章，而后面又说请您批评指正，但语病是没有的
某某老师您好，我是某某学校某某系的某某，这次很荣幸能得到老师您的指点。在此附上论文初稿，请您批评指正，谢谢老师。
老师您好,这是我的论文初稿
给老师交论文，那么要是交的时候一定要是让老师给一定的修改，让老师提供建议
可以说老师我现在来交论文了，里面有什么不清楚的地方，还请老师多多指点。
硬要说的话就是有些啰嗦了，斧正就是请别人修改文章，而后面又说请您批评指正，但语病是没有的
老师您好这是我的论文初稿
硬要说的话就是有些啰嗦了，斧正就是请别人修改文章，而后面又说请您批评指正，但语病是没有的
首先简明表达自己的来意，然后提出自己的请求，最后礼貌结尾。×××老师，您好！在您的帮助指导下，我的关于xxxx的毕业论文已经初步完成了，现在递上我的毕业论文给您，希望能得到您的一些指导意见，完善一些不足之处。谢谢老师，老师辛苦啦。如果第一次发信息可以是：×××老师，您好！我是×××，我是您毕业论文带的学生。……首先，就是礼貌问题，注意用词，表达感谢。请教问题，请老师帮我，希望得到一些指导……用语不要太过僵硬。其次是表达感谢，在写论文中，老师有指导要表达出来感恩；请老师帮忙修改也要表达感谢。然后要注意直接，少说废话。要直接简单的说你为什么要打电话、发消息，直接讨论你的论文的事情，免得绕弯子耽误老师的时间。其他小tips：要准时。尽量按照师生约定的时间提交。如果不能，要提前和老师做好沟通说明，避免出现老师来催你的情况。不要有错别字。错别字是态度不端正的一种表现，你完全可以通过仔细检查避免这些错误，不要让自己的论文在“小问题”上栽跟头。论文提交方式要注意。按照导师的阅读习惯，选择合适的方式提交。邮箱、qq、微信……老师的修改意见应该仔细斟酌如果不理解不要不懂装懂，一定要“刨根问底”，也可以充分探讨，在充分理解的基础上，修改完善。
给老师交论文，那么要是交的时候一定要是让老师给一定的修改，让老师提供建议
老师好,这是我的论文初稿,请您有空指导意见
首先简明表达自己的来意，然后提出自己的请求，最后礼貌结尾。×××老师，您好！在您的帮助指导下，我的关于xxxx的毕业论文已经初步完成了，现在递上我的毕业论文给您，希望能得到您的一些指导意见，完善一些不足之处。谢谢老师，老师辛苦啦。如果第一次发信息可以是：×××老师，您好！我是×××，我是您毕业论文带的学生。……首先，就是礼貌问题，注意用词，表达感谢。请教问题，请老师帮我，希望得到一些指导……用语不要太过僵硬。其次是表达感谢，在写论文中，老师有指导要表达出来感恩；请老师帮忙修改也要表达感谢。然后要注意直接，少说废话。要直接简单的说你为什么要打电话、发消息，直接讨论你的论文的事情，免得绕弯子耽误老师的时间。其他小tips：要准时。尽量按照师生约定的时间提交。如果不能，要提前和老师做好沟通说明，避免出现老师来催你的情况。不要有错别字。错别字是态度不端正的一种表现，你完全可以通过仔细检查避免这些错误，不要让自己的论文在“小问题”上栽跟头。论文提交方式要注意。按照导师的阅读习惯，选择合适的方式提交。邮箱、qq、微信……老师的修改意见应该仔细斟酌如果不理解不要不懂装懂，一定要“刨根问底”，也可以充分探讨，在充分理解的基础上，修改完善。
老师好，我已按要求完成我的论文初稿，请批阅，不足之处请老师指出，谢谢。
某某老师您好，我是某某学校某某系的某某，这次很荣幸能得到老师您的指点。在此附上论文初稿，请您批评指正，谢谢老师。
老师您好,这是我的论文初稿英文
Dear teachers， good morning! My name is xx， is 08 levels of English this regular professional training students， I dissertation5 topic is "the cultural differences between Chinese and western communication" Papers are in the x professor of meticulous coaxed completion， here I asked my tutor our deepest thanks to all the teacher pains to attend my thesis heartfelt thanks for three years， and I have a chance to listen to all teachers teaching our heartfelt Below I will this paper designed and main content to each teacher makes a report， kindly fellow teachers criticized First of all， I want to talk about the graduation thesis of purpose and As China's social and economic development， world various nationalities between commercial frequent communication and People in different cultures in the process of communication is cross-cultural To understand the cultural differences between Chinese and western communication can better promote the national economy， cultural exchange between and This paper with the relationship between language and culture of Chinese and western culture by listing from daily communicative language communication to the understanding of the euphemism， taboo language and posture language differences in learning English analysis how to foster intercultural communication competence， avoid in our daily communication appear misurclerstanding was discussed in the Secondly， I want to talk about this essay structure and its main Thesis mainly divided into five The first part is the Summary of Chinese and western culture communication system in today's social The second part is the relationship between language and Through the description of the relationship between language and culture， explains the relationship between language and culture are inseparable， deep influence culture， different language caused the cultural The third part is the cultural differences between Chinese and western For example demonstrated through communication between China and the west in everyday language used in the course， euphemism， taboo language and posture language is different， thus explain that communication between Chinese and western cultural The fourth part is of the cultivation of intercultural communication Lists related to foster intercultural communication competence methods， in order to avoid people in our daily communication appear erroneous The fifth part is summarized and S In order to succeed in cross-cultural communication， will realize our national culture and western culture， the differences between in communication right choice accords with western cultural norms expression in order to achieve the aim of Foreign language learners should not only try to master the accurate and fluent and natural English language， learn to decent， naturally transmitted and received communicative message， Also want to understand and grasp of English countries cultural background knowledge and customs， learn to overcome in communication barriers produced cultural Meanwhile， foreign language learners but must take the culture differences， trying to broaden their perspective of culture， to learn more about English culture of the country， in a solid foundation of language application ability at the same time， develop their intercultural consciousness， improve their ability to cross-cultural Finally， I want to talk about this essay and system This essay writing and modification process， also is the more I realize his lack of experience and knowledge of the Although， I will try to collect materials， we try our best to use their own knowledge thesis paper writing， but there are still many shortcomings， needs to be Please， judges much criticism and corrections， let me in the future learn hank you可能有些错误。。。。呵呵
硬要说的话就是有些啰嗦了，斧正就是请别人修改文章，而后面又说请您批评指正，但语病是没有的
Dear Mr/Ms（根据老师的性别选择，Mr对应男老师，并加上姓氏，比如Mr 李），this is my