雅思和毕业论文
比如你是2017年6月份毕业，2017年9月入学，一般常规申请2017年4月份之前录取结果就出来了，那就意味着2016年6月份就需要完成语言考试，之后的时间网申，准备文书的工作。如果你语言好，一般建议准备半年就好了，大三上个学期，是准备语言的最好机会，半年之后参加考试，雅思有效期是2年。如果是要申请top院校，建议每年都需要刷高自己的GPA，祝好运。
有机会。翰思(913864922)大表哥提醒一句：argue很重要！有时候可能你的论文本身是没有严重的问题的，但是你的论文却没有及格，在这种情况下，你就应该和学校进行沟通与argue。当然了这只限于你论文挂科的原因是在于一些意外的情况，比如导师本身所存在的问题或者他对某事物的偏见，这些都会影响你的论文结果。如果真的是这样，你就必须和学校系主任申诉argue，而且当你在与他们进行argue的时候，前提是你必须要有足够的明确的证据来证明你的观点是正确的，只有学校看到了证据，他们才会支持你的论文，并且对你的论文重新评估。另外，大表哥不知道你的具体情况，所以再笼统地给你一些适用大多数情况的经验，希望帮到你：挂科后首先向导师求助。第一步：寻求导师的修改意见你一定要根据导师的建议来修改或者写论文，导师的建议很重要，你不能完全按照自己的思路来盲目写论文，不然的话，肯定还是不合格。第二步：根据导师意见认真修改你必须把论文不合格的原因找出来，对症下药。如果你的论文格式达标，你就必须完善你的论文格式而且要达到规定字数要求；如果你的论文内容单调没有什么实质性内容，你就必须对你的论文内容进行扩充使它饱满。一般外国的老师喜欢图文并茂，章节多一点，分的可以细一些，因此，你可以在你的论文中添加一些带说明性的图片，这样会使你的论文更生动饱满。具体情况还是要具体分析的，加油。
，，只要用心哪部分都不难 ，， ，， 从5。5分到7分 也就是一个多月 ，，方法如下 ： 首先，我先说一下我本来的英语水平，其实从考到七分的是我bf,我是从6分考到7分，但是我们用的学习方法是一样的，所以我来代笔了。我们都是大四才开始接触雅思的，我们都是勉强过四六级的人，六级都考了两次，真不好意思。去年11月考了第一次，结果我6分，他，这是绝对不够的，而他要申请的专业要求要7分，当时我们差不多绝望了，因为谁都告诉我们，7分好似天方夜谭。接下来的日子，我们忙于自己的毕业论文毕业设计，一直没时间看雅思，直到今天7月我们才彻底空了下来，然后我们就开始全力投入雅思复习，如果还在学习中的烤鸭们，也可以参考我们的方法，因为我们每天复习的时间完全可以从每天的空闲时间挤出来。我们曾经参加过培训课程，在第一次考之前，没什么大效果，只是了解了雅思题型。雅思复习，乃至其他英语考试，其实都应该回到最基本的英语学习，这是这次经历的最大感受。1.剑桥一到四的合理运用这次我们复习几乎没有别的材料，只用了剑桥一到四，直道我们考试之前才出了剑五，拿来当模拟题做了做，难度好像没有剑四大。很多烤鸭们手里都有剑一到剑四，但是都没有好好利用，我们在第一次考之前，已经草草的把剑一到剑三做了，但这绝对是没有用的。这次我们静下心来，把每篇剑桥里的文章都精读，我想这是很多烤鸭们都知道的方法，但是有几个真正这样做了呢？我保证，如果你真的这样做了，结果会是惊喜的！精读是什么？就是把文章里不认识的单词都看懂，都背出来，当然有些专有名词什么的，可以省略，但是大多数次都应该背出来，至少应该看到能够认识。我们是这样做的，第一遍看的时候，扫读，把不认识的字圈出来，然后用金山词霸查，这样有个好处，可以把生词放入生词本，然后打印出来，这样比较省时间，可以以一篇文章或者一套题目作为单位，推荐金山词霸2006，他的生词本的次序是按照输入顺序的，而2005会自动按照字母排列。也许一开始这样做，会觉得很浪费时间，有时候，看一篇文章就要三个小时以上，但是一定有效果的。每天不要急，只要看一篇文章就够了，这样剑一到剑四一共也就48篇文章而已，其实我们只精读了剑一到剑三，因为慢慢的，不认识的单词就会变得少了，剑四剑五我们都是拿来做模拟题的。不过还有一点值得提醒，就是不能看一篇丢一片，要每天复习，每周复习，不断稳固单词。这只是说了单词的学习，其实这褪腔�。�馐侵刂兄�兀��裁丛亩敛缓茫烤褪堑ゴ什皇欤�跋煸亩了俣群椭柿俊＝酉吕淳褪窃诰�凉�讨校��笨梢宰龅囊患�拢�褪俏�醋骰�鄄牧稀?/P> 剑桥中的文章其实有很多关于发展，文化，环境的题材，在精读的时候，可以适当做些记录，偷懒的就直接在文章中圈注，还有一些长句难句，也可以作为学习的对象，不仅对阅读有益，而且对作文的也是很有帮助的。这次我们几乎没怎么专门复习作文，但都考到了7分，是一个意外，但也算意料之中吧。2.听力复习经验都说听力是最容易提高的一门，可以说是，也可以说不是。其实和阅读一样，听力复习也没什么捷径，也不需要搜集很多很多材料。我们手头也就只有除了剑桥以外，一套以前参加朗阁是的教材，全都是做过的。我们就拿来精听。什么是精听？就是每篇文章听2遍以上（一般s1，只需听2遍，其他听3遍以上）我们听得时候几乎不看题目，因为题目以前按都做过一遍。就在听得时候，自己做记录。记录一些自己认为是考点的关键词，例如人名，时间，地点，列举……这主要针对前3个section，一般一开始听一两遍，觉得都能听懂，听懂不是只大意，而是指几乎每个句子每个单词。当然，每篇文章里都会有不认识的单词，虽然听力里的难词不太多，但也要总结，也要背。等所有单词都查过，背好，最后在听一到两遍，直到能把本来的生词也能很清楚的听到，而且比较快的反应出来，写下来为止。每天的听力练习保持在2小时左右，一般我们精听得话，能听一整套，四个section。剑一剑二比较旧，剑三剑四剑五还是比较推荐的。3作文及口语复习其实对于作文，我没有很专门的复习，只是在精读的时候，积累了单词，积累的写长句的方法，自然而然的有了提高。当然，一些关联词，连接词，还有所谓套句，都是值得看一下的，虽然这些如果认真看阅读的时候，都能看到最好的例句。但是千万别生搬硬套。考试之前，还是应该练练手，看好时间，我觉得，考试作文最大问题就是时间紧，所以这点要注意。然后考试的时候，下笔之前，一定要明确自己的观点，最好列的简单的提纲。口语，我又要说了，再练听力的时候，其实也是对口语一个很好的积累，一些口头的表达方式，可以在作听力的时候适当记录。不过因为口语是我们两个唯一没有进步，因为从来没有复习的一门，就是互相练习过一些常规题。所以就不多说啦。4。总结精读3小时/天，精听2小时/天，这都是指有效时间，如果你的学习效率不高的话，那只能增加学习时间了。这样48天就能精读完剑一到剑四，能听48套听力，如果没有那么多听力作的话，可以反复听已有的材料。最后20天，可以开始进行作文练习，一个星期写一到两篇大作文和小作文即可。口语么，平时可以找人每天练习五分钟就好，把一些常规问题准备好
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雅思论文查重
一般来说，Turnitin等查重软件会将论文中的文本进行分段和比对，然后计算出每个文本段落的相似度，最终将所有文本段落的相似度加权计算得到论文的总相似度和重复率。如果论文的相似度超过一定阈值，该论文可能被判定为存在抄袭问题。
英文论文查重通常采用的是Turnitin软件；查重一般是通过与已有的学术文献、网络文本等进行比对，检测论文中的相似度和重复率。具体的算法和计算方法是由该软件自行设计和实现的，而且每个软件的算法和计算方法也不尽相同。
在编写论文时，为了避免论文被查重软件判定为存在抄袭问题，应该避免直接复制粘贴他人的文本，同时也要注意参考文献的引用格式和标准。如果论文被查重软件判定为存在抄袭问题，应该及时修改和调整论文内容，确保其符合学术道德和规范。
知网查重率超过30%了是不合格的
英文论文查重时，一般要求论文查重率不超过30％。如果论文查重率在检测时大于50％，则该论文不可以通过审核。论文检测时，论文查重率范围更为关键，论文查重率问题非常重要。 论文中的查重率通过查重系统进行检测出来的，将论文与文献资源库进行对比。算法检测后获得的查重率在论文中的查重率结果非常重要。那么，英语论文查重率多少符合标准？paperfree小编给大家讲解。 英文论文复制时，一般要求论文复制率不超过30％。如果文本查重率在查重时超过50％，则该论文可以通过审核。在论文检测过程中，论文查重率的范围是关键，论文查重率的问题非常重要，一般来说，如果复制率低于10％，则非常安全，可以直接参与答辩。 对于本科生来说，非常推荐学校要求的查重系统。学校内部查重系统有硕博论文和大学生联合对比库。大学生联合对比库是本科论文库。查重时非常适合使用本课查重，这也是国内大部分高校采用的。
1.雅思考试分为四个部分听力阅读写作和口语。除了口语以外都是通过铅笔答题。2.雅思考试的笔试部分(听力阅读写作)一共有大概两个小时四十五分钟，其中听力大概有三十分钟左右，通常有选择题让你在答题卡上填写字母的，有填空题让你写单词的。阅读有一个小时的时间，三篇文章，自然科学类的，基本上也可以简单的理解为要你做选择题(包括配对之类的)和简答题(都是三个单词以内的)写在答题卡上。3.然后写作就是有一篇小作文和一篇大作文了，小作文150个词，大作文250个词以上，要在一个小时内用铅笔写在写作的答题卡上。其实总体上看了时间紧的是雅思阅读
雅思讨论文范文
2017雅思作文参考范文
老一辈人对人们的生活、思想和行为有着非常传统的`观念。然而，有些人认为这些想法对现代生活的年轻一代没有任何帮助。你同意这种观点吗?为什么?下面是我分享的雅思作文范文，希望能对大家有所帮助!
题目：The older generations tend to have very traditional ideas about how people should live, think and behave. However, some people believe that these ideas are not helpful in preparing younger generations for modern life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
范文：
It is true that many older people believe in traditional values that often seem incompatible with the needs of younger people. While I agree that some traditional ideas are outdated, I believe that others are still useful and should not be forgotten.
On the one hand, many of the ideas that elderly people have about life are becoming less relevant for younger people. In the past, for example, people were advised to learn a profession and find a secure job for life, but today’s workers expect much more variety and diversity from their careers. At the same time, the ‘rules’ around relationships are being eroded as young adults make their own choices about who and when to marry. But perhaps the greatest disparity between the generations can be seen in their attitudes towards gender roles. The traditional roles of men and women, as breadwinners and housewives, are no longer accepted as necessary or appropriate by most younger people.
On the other hand, some traditional views and values are certainly applicable to the modern world. For example, older generations attach great importance to working hard, doing one’s best, and taking pride in one’s work, and these behaviours can surely benefit young people as they enter today’s competitive job market. Other characteristics that are perhaps seen as traditional are politeness and good manners. In our globalised world, young adults can expect to come into contact with people from a huge variety of backgrounds, and it is more important than ever to treat others with respect. Finally, I believe that young people would lead happier lives if they had a more ‘old-fashioned’ sense of community and neighbourliness.
In conclusion, although the views of older people may sometimes seem unhelpful in today’s world, we should not dismiss all traditional ideas as irrelevant.
题目：Art classes, like painting and drawing, are not as important as other subjects, so some people think that it should not be a compulsory subject at high school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
范文1：
Schools are places where students acquire knowledge and skills needed for further achievements. Given the pressure that students are facing, some cannot help wondering whether art classes should still be compulsory.
Those holding the view that art classes should not be compulsory might think that art consumes too much of students' time. Fierce competitions students will face When applying for universities necessitate total devotion to academic subjects. College students who intend to take science as their major are even expected to be fluent in foreign languages now so that essays written by foreign scholars are not barriers in their academic pursuit. In other words, high school students are supposed to show higher levels of academic competence,which seemingly makes art unessential.
However, art classes are by no means only intended for entertainment. Children even dabbling in art tend to be more creative in mind. Those skilled in music or painting can interpret the world in a way that we cannot expect from a layman. This kind of ingenuity is also a rare quality constantly found in great scientists, whose contributions have served to create a totally new field for the latter generations. In his reply to a question about death, Albert Einstein considered his departure from the mortal world to be forever farewell to another great musician. With a sigh he answered "I cannot listen to Mozart anymore". Thus, can we simply regard art classes to be selective?
In conclusion, although stricter academic requirements are imposed on students, this cannot be an excuse for excluding art subjects from their curricula. Whatever kind of art can stimulate and inspire students, paving way for their future academic attainment.
范文2：
When the news came that art classes such as music, painting and drawing would be made mandatory in my high school, it was met with both approvals and objections. This mixed response reflects the different attitudes towards the role of art in the education of high school students.
Those who stand up for art classes argue that art is so important to the students’ development that it should be made compulsory. By taking art classes, students may come out of their shell socially and make friends with those with similar interests. Furthermore, rather than a waste of time, taking art classes can actually help students with other subjects such as maths and physics. The theory is that art can help exercise our mental power (imagination, for example) and make us smarter. More importantly, art calls for persistent practice and unyielding stamina, which are also important qualities that we expect our students to possess.
Objections of art classes as required mainly come from those who think art classes are a waste of time because they are not useful to students. Except for the very few who may take art as their lifelong career, the great majority of students will not get a job in relation to art when they finish their high school. Besides, what is the point of compelling a student who has no interest in art to spend many hours restlessly in the art classes?
To my mind, art classes should become compulsory in high school. The objective of education is not just to let students acquire the basic practical survival skills, but to prepare them for the future life, both physically and mentally. With this in mind, we can safely conclude that the time spent on art will be rewarding in the long run. Of course, the schools should be very careful when deciding on the required hours that should be spent on art classes.
雅思写作的提高不仅需要自己勤加练习，还要多读多看，以下是我给大家整理的雅思写作 范文 及素材：城市化。希望对大家的雅思写作备考有所帮助
雅思写作大 作文 高分范文城市化的影响
Question
These days, it seems that an increasing number of people are leaving rural areas to live in the city.
Discuss some of the effects of rural depopulation ( migration from the country to the city) and suggest some ways in which this trend could be reversed?
Key words analysis
? rural areas: 郊区, 它的相对词是urban areas
? depopulation: 减少居民，后面括号内的内容是岁这个词的解释
? trend: 趋势，和tide, current同义
? reverse: 使倒转
Argument:
? 这是属于 议论文 中的problem的类型，通常会在要求学生表达对这个问题的看法和给出一些解决方案。
Possible effects :
? 过于拥挤的城市易影响城市的舒适度
? 过于拥挤的城市可能会导致失业率升高
Possible solutions:
? 政府进行商业性的引导
? 加强农村基础建设，提升生活便利性
Model Essay 1 – Part 1
Introduction
Rural depopulation is a very important issue in many parts of the world today. In this essay, I will discuss some of the main effects of this problem and also offer some possible solutions to it.
Main body 1
Firstly, it is clear that migration away from the country negatively affects life in the city. Serious environmental and social problems often occur when cities become overcrowded. Problems such as air, water and noise pollution are now increasingly common in urban areas around the world because there are simply too many people living there. Pollution can make city life very uncomfortable indeed and can even cause illness. Beijing is a very good example of this. Overcrowding in cities can also lead to high unemployment (especially in poorer parts of the world) and crime.
Model Essay 1 – Part 2
Main body 2
In order to prevent people from moving away from the country and reduce the size of cities, I feel we must make country life more attractive. In my view, the best way of doing this would be to improve services in the country. One of the main reasons that so many people have left the country is that facilities like shopping centres, cinemas, swimming pools, restaurants, libraries, schools and hospitals are generally better in the city. If such facilities were available in the country, more people would choose to live there. Another effective solution would be for the government to subsidies businesses and workers who move to the country.
Conclusion
n conclusion, I believe we must all recognise how serious this problem is. For the sake of the environment and our own quality of life it is vital that we preserve rural communities.
雅思考试大作文范文:过度城市化的原因和结果
雅思大作文题目：
Since cities have changed a lot, the size ofthe cities has grown enormously. Discuss thecauses and consequence of the enormous sizeof cities.
雅思大作文范文：
Nowadays, the maps of cities are updatedfrequently. With the development of city, more andmore suburbs become parts of the city. When thecities in the world are amplifying constantly, peoplediscuss the topic hotly, the causes andconsequence of the enormous cities. Different people have different answers by theirrespective views.
In my opinion, the evolution of society and the development of economy result in thegrowth of the vast size of cities. Since the number of population in every city is increasingcontinually, people need a large amount of space to live in. With the progress of the technology,the output of crops rises sharply. Fewer and fewer farmers are required, as a result, more andmore villages urbanize. The growth of the cities brings us many huge changes.
There are more job opportunities in the cities. For instance, China will hold the OlympicGames in Beijing in 2008. The government is amplifying the size of Beijing to build new gyms inorder to hold it excellently. Obviously, people in the cities could gain a lot of new jobs.
Of course, the enormous size of cities also has bad effects. Pollution is becoming more andmore serious all over the world with the amplification of the cities. For example, thepoisonous gas sent off by factories and automobiles has made the air unhealthy for people tobreathe. Water waste keeps pouring into rivers and lakes; as a result, many water species aredying out. Furthermore, more people the city have, more rubbish we can find.
In a word, since each coin has two sides, we should be acquainted clearly with the reasonswhy the size of the cities has grown enormously and what it will bring us. Thus, we could makefull use of the positive effects and overcome the negative effects.
雅思大作文范文解析-如何解决城市建设带来的问题
题目
The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that are suitable and livable for people in those times. What problems will this cause today and what can be done to solve these problems?
题型：问题解决
翻译：世界上有许多几个世纪前建造的城镇，适合那时代的人们居住。这会导致今天出现什么问题以及如何解决这些问题呢?
写作结构
开头段：背景引入+话题介绍
主体段 1：可能造成的问题
主体段 2：可以采取的 措施
结尾段： 总结 概括
范文解析
开头段
交代背景“如今全球化和现代化超过了城镇建设，并带来一些问题”，政府需要采取措施解决它们。
背景句：Globalization and modernization nowadays have considerably outpaced the construction of new cities，which has brought some adverse impacts on people’s life.
话题介绍：Under pressure, the government needs to identify them to reduce complaints from citizens.
主体段 1
商业开发为一些城市的城市化带来了一些问题，如交通堵塞，住房紧张等。
主题句：Commercial development gives a facility to urbanization in some cities where the basic infrastructure does not match the needs of enormous flow of dwellers.
平行列举 1：In some cases, the shortage of transportation means that the road would be blocked by vehicles especially during rush hours. This low efficient traffic can have negative implications on business to some extent.
平行列举 2：Apart from stagnated traffic, there are accommodation issues to be considered. This is because the advances of economy surely require large numbers of migrants. If single-storey constructions without necessary facilities including heating, sewage system and even electricity supply take a dominating place in city, it would be difficult for those workers to dwell comfortably.
主体段 2
为解决上述问题，政府可以采取一些措施。如建设高架桥和地下交通系统减轻道路交通;说服房地产公司建造更多功能性的区域来甘山城市面貌。
主题句：To solve the problems identified above, the most influential factor may be the government who is responsible for modifying the old cities.
平行列举：Perhaps viaducts are needed to accommodate more vehicles and underground traffic systems such as railways or underpass tunnels can serve to ease road traffic dramatically. Persuading estate companies to construct more functional concrete jungles would probably be an effective strategy to mitigate the terrible living or working conditions. It would also help to improve the overlook of city if some districts are demolished for central business areas, public parks or statues.
结尾段
总结概括 文章 内容。
Overall, the governors play a vital role in city development, and tax payers should have the awareness of maintaining their new cities.
重点表达
impact on... 对...产生影响
to some extent 在某种程度上
it will/would be difficult for sb to do sth 对某人来讲做某事是有困难的
serve to 服务于
play a vital role in 在某方面发挥巨大作用
雅思大作文范文解析-如何解决城乡差异大的问题
题目
Some people think a rise in standard of living in a country only seems to benefit cities more than rural areas. What problems may those differences cause? How to solve those problems?
题型：问题解决
翻译：有些人认为，提高一个国家的生活水平似乎给城市带来的好处比农村更大。这些差异会造成什么问题?如何解决这些问题?
写作结构
开头段：引入背景+话题介绍
主体段 1：可能造成的问题之一
主体段 2：可能造成的问题之二
结尾段：可采取的措施
范文解析
开头段
交代背景“一个国家的工业化和城市化大大提高了公民的生活水平。然而，许多人断言发展的成就城市超过农村，并产生了许多问题”，表示“应采取措施解决问题”。
背景句：The industrialization and urbanization of a country have massively improved the living standard of its citizens. However, many people assert that the developmental achievements have benefited cities much more than rural areas and a series of problems have arisen.
话题介绍：This essay will discuss the problems and then offer feasible solutions to cope with the situation.
主体段 1
高度发达的大都市区占据了多数的优质资源，提供了大量的就业和商业机会，导致大量年轻农村居民涌入城市寻求机会，直接导致欠发达地区的劳动力和资金严重短缺。
主题句：The imbalance of economic and social progress between rural and urban areas is starkly visible and have triggered a number of problems.
平行列举：First, the highly developed metropolitan areas have occupied the quality resources of education, medical service, finance, commerce and entertainment, providing numerous opportunities in employment and business. As a result, a large number of young rural dwellers crowd into the city to pursue education, hunt jobs and make investments, directly leading to the severe shortage of available labour force and capital in the underdeveloped places. The loss in population and finance would inevitably worsen the overall economic development in rural districts.
主体段 2
由于农村和城市居民的受 教育 程度、职业和收入不同，可能导致农村居民进城务工的时候收到歧视。
主题句：The second problem resides in the aftermath of rural-urban migration.
平行列举：As a multicultural destination, the city holds a huge population with diverse backgrounds in terms of education, profession, income, social class, and even accent. Individuals from underdeveloped places tend to have less professional competence and personal wealth, due to the lack of educational and commercial resources in rural areas. Such discrepancy might trigger discrimination towards the rural residents who struggle their way through the urban jungle. What's worse, the widening wealth gap might even force the poorer ones to commit crimes to obtain more material possession.
结尾段
可采取措施解决发展不平衡的问题，如政府应该帮助农村居民利用当地资源发展旅游和商业贸易产业;在农村地区的教育系统中投入更多的劳动力和资金;还需要立法和监管来打击与歧视和暴力有关的行为。
Several solutions could be taken into account to improve the situation. The government should help rural residents exploiting local resources, such as natural landscape and specialty products, to develop industries in tourism and commercial trade. Once the industries are on the rise, job opportunities would be generated, along with a growing business revenue and average income. In addition, more workforce and fund should be invested into the education system in rural areas. If rural dwellers could obtain a specific skill or a certain academic qualification, they would be more professionally competent and employable. Furthermore, legislation and regulation are also required to fight against conduct related to discrimination and violence.
重点表达
living standard 生活水平
a series of 一系列
cope with 处理，解决
labour force 劳动力
simon雅思写作观点总结之城市化
Simon 写作观点集：Cities 城市化
for Urbanization 城市化的原因
People move to cities in search of job opportunities
Cities offer greater employment possibilities and a higher standard of living
People migrate to cities from the countryside
Traditional activities like farming need fewer workers nowadays
of City Life 城市生活的缺点
Life in cities has its drawbacks
The cost of living is higher than in rural areas
Some people d not manage to find work
Housing is usually much more expensive
Homelessness and poverty are common on cities
There is a gap between rich and poor
Life in cities can be extremely stressful
There are problems like traffic congestion and crime
Cities lack a sense of community
People do not even know their neighbor
Cities are sometimes described as “concrete jungles”.
Areas 人行道
Pedestrian zones in city centre can improve the local environment
Banning cars encourages people to walk or cycle
Many European cities have built bicycle lanes
Dependence on cars is linked to health problems like obesity
People who walk or cycle regularly are generally healthier
Pedestrian areas are safer and more attractive for both residents and tourists
雅思小论文范文
雅思写作小作文
阅读历年雅思作文，参考他们的作文结构合写作思路，有助于我们写雅思小作文。下面是我分享的雅思小作文范文，欢迎大家阅读!
separate line graphs answer
题目：
The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
范文：
Here's my full answer:
The line graphs show the average monthly amount that parents in Britain spent on their children’s sporting activities and the number of British children who took part in three different sports from 2008 to 2014.
It is clear that parents spent more money each year on their children’s participation in sports over the six-year period. In terms of the number of children taking part, football was significantly more popular than athletics and swimming.
In 2008, British parents spent an average of around £20 per month on their children’s sporting activities. Parents’ spending on children’s sports increased gradually over the following six years, and by 2014 the average monthly amount had risen to just over £30.
Looking at participation numbers, in 2008 approximately 8 million British children played football, while only 2 million children were enrolled in swimming clubs and less than 1 million practised athletics. The figures for football participation remained relatively stable over the following 6 years. By contrast, participation in swimming almost doubled, to nearly 4 million children, and there was a near fivefold increase in the number of children doing athletics.
'waste graph' answer
范文：
The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015.
It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.
In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne.
From 2005 to 2015, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 2015, company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes.
(192 words, band 9)
pie charts report
题目;
The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
范文：
The pie charts compare visitors’ responses to a survey about customer service at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and in 2010.
It is clear that overall customer satisfaction increased considerably from 2005 to 2010. While most hotel guests rated customer service as satisfactory or poor in 2005, a clear majority described the hotel’s service as good or excellent in 2010.
Looking at the positive responses first, in 2005 only 5% of the hotel’s visitors rated its customer service as excellent, but this figure rose to 28% in 2010. Furthermore, while only 14% of guests described customer service in the hotel as good in 2005, almost three times as many people gave this rating five years later.
With regard to negative feedback, the proportion of guests who considered the hotel’s customer service to be poor fell from 21% in 2005 to only 12% in 2010. Similarly, the proportion of people who thought customer service was very poor dropped from 15% to only 4% over the 5-year period. Finally, a fall in the number of ‘satisfactory’ ratings in 2010 reflects the fact that more people gave positive responses to the survey in that year.
(193 words, band 9)
《我的奇思幻想》…暑假来临了，我和妈妈打算去上海海迪士尼游玩，我多么希望在那里住一宿。这可需要一笔不菲的费用呢！对了，我可以发明一栋飞在天空的房子啊！？！正好还不用花火车票钱了！真是一个两全其美的办法！它和农村的房子没什么两样，只是它的两侧长了一对巨大无比的翅膀，这能够让它在天空中飞翔，家里的所有电器都是太阳能，连冰箱电视，洗衣机都是太阳能的，这栋房子不仅能飞上天，而且他平均每分钟行驶100千米，从集宁到上海迪士尼用不了半小时，因为房子可以在天空中快速行驶，所以大大节省了我们的时间，同时免去了舟车劳顿之苦。到哪里只需要交门票钱，这下坐车的钱，和住酒店的钱就可以省了，这就是我发明，天空中的房子，有了这栋房子，大家就可以带着自己的家人出去游玩了
这是简单的小范文
2018年6月30日雅思小作文范文：柱状图
2018年6月30日场的雅思小作文真题范文已出，小作文类型：柱状图。本期小作文题目是：The chart below shows the rate of males and females who were overweight in Australia from 1980 to 2010.
雅思小作文类型：Bar chart
雅思小作文范文解析
看到小作文，我们首先要定位3W(when, where, what),该柱状图描述的时间是过去的4个年份，跨度30年。地点为澳洲。内容为超重男女的比例。该题目内容一目了然，男性比率总高于女性，所以思路解答上可以男女分开，描述各自的变化趋势。范文共计8句话。
雅思小作文范文
The bar chart compares the gender distribution of overweight men and women in Australia in four separate years 1980, 1990, 2000 and 2010.
Across all the years, it is apparent that the proportion of males who were obese was significantly higher than that of their female counterparts. Initially, almost one half (48%) of the male tended to be excessively fat. This number rose merely by 4% in the following decade before shooting up and arriving at its peak at 69% in 2000. Subsequently, there was a marginally downward trend, ending up with 65%.
Similarly, the rate of females also showed an upward in the first two decades in spite of a relatively lower proportion (28%) occupied in 1980. This figure had consistently increased to 49% until 2000 and had remained stable by the end of the period.
In brief, the chart shows that although overweight population continued to be male-dominated in Australia over the past few decades,the gender gap had ultimately narrowed.
范文原创自小站老师Alice. Hua
字数 162 words
雅思小作文高分表达
compares the gender distribution rose merely
in four separate years shooting up and arriving at its peak at
it is apparent that a marginally downward trend
was significantly higher than Had consistently increased
female counterparts had remained stable
雅思论文写作模板
为了帮助大家备考托福阅读，提高成绩，下面我给大家带来雅思写作参考：比较不同观点的优劣，希望大家喜欢!
雅思写作参考模板：比较不同观点的优劣
给出两个对立事物或一个事物对立的两个方面，要求考生说明二者为什么不同或比较它们的优缺点，并给出理由。
具体表述如下：
TOPIC: Some people believe that A while others consider B more appropriate. Give advantages and disadvantages of the two positions and explain which position you support.
MODEL (1)
A and B are two totally different ideas that have caused heated debate over a long period of time. Anyway, I agree with the idea of A. However, it is unfair to say which is better than the other if we don’t see both sides of the story in the following paragraphs.
Some people believe B because①. These people point out the fact that②. They also argue that ③.
However, other people stand on a very different ground. They believe that④. They firmly point out that⑤. An example can give the details of this argument: ⑥. In addition, ⑦.
In a word, A is too tempting not to be chosen. A, as shown above, has ⑧. ⑨.
①人们支持B的第一个原因
②进一步阐述支持B的第一个原因
③支持B的第二个原因
④支持A的第一个原因
⑤进一步阐述支持A的第一个原因
⑥举例说明支持A的第一个原因
⑦支持A的第二个原因
⑧选择A的第一个好处
⑨选择A的第二个好处
MODEL (2)
Some people believe that①. Other people take the view that②. While both methods may have their advantages and disadvantages, they can be applied under different circumstances. Afterwards, I will explain my opinion about it.
For A, ③
But this also demonstrates that④
Moreover, ⑤
B, on the other hand, ⑥. For example, ⑦.
In my opinion, the advantages of B are more than those of A because B fits me better in two ways; First⑧. Second, ⑨.
①人们的第一种观点
②人们的第二种观点
③A的一个优势
④A所隐含的劣势
⑤A的一个大缺点
⑥B的一个明显优势
⑦举例说明B的优势
⑧对我来讲，B的第一个优势
⑨对我来讲，B的第二个优势
雅思写作真题解析:传统购物和网络购物的优劣对比
一、Traditional shopping way 传统的购物方式
(一)Advantages优势
1. Experience goods in person 亲自感受产品
2. Avoid being defrauded 避免上当
3. Bargain with attendant 和服务员砍价
4. Make decision after comparing goods 在比较过产品后决定购买
5. Get goods, receipts, and invoices immediately 可以立即得到货物、 收据 和发票
6. A good chance for family members to communicate via items 是家庭成员通过货物沟通的一个好机会
7. Bridge generation gap and develop same aesthetic concept 解决代沟并培养相同的审美观点
8. A pastime for us to spend leisure time and ease pressure 可以作为一种消遣来打发闲暇时间而且可以缓解压力
9. An opportunity for parents to teach their children how to be thrifty 父母可以借此机会教孩子怎样省钱
10. An opportunity for children to teach their parents how to be fashionable 孩子可以借此机会教父母怎样时尚
(二)Disadvantages劣势
1. Labor-consuming and time-costing 耗体力、费时间
2. The public tastes and styles are unified 公众的品位与风格统一了
3. Shopping expenses are mainly shouldered by men and they will be confronted with more serious economic burden.男性承担了绝大多数的购物费用，他们要面临更为严重的经济负担
4. Buying some unnecessary bargains.买一些不需要的东西。
二、 Other means 其它 方式
(一)Advantages 优势
1. Effective and convenient 高效率、方便
2. Effortlessly comparable 可以不费力气的进行比较
3. Extensive choices on intensive platform在密集的平台上选择广泛的货物
4. Make barter dealing available 使得易货贸易成为了可能
5. Enable consumers to purchase items as a package 使得消费者可以一下买齐所有产品
(二)Disadvantages
1. Extra expenses are required 要花额外的费用
2. Incomplete payment system 不完善的支付系统
3. Adulterated goods 参杂使假的货物
4. Unsuitable for consumers to purchase the goods in eager demand 不适合消费者购买急需的产品
5. Offending copy rights and patents 侵犯版权与专利
6. Pirated misconducts can not be effectively avoided 盗版行为无法有效的避免
7. Booking ticket by e-commerce may delay one’s scheduling 通过电子商务订票会耽误人的安排
8. The information filed in e-commerce websites may reveal one’s privacy 存在电子商务网站的信息会透露隐私
雅思写作 范文 ：频换工作的优缺点
Version 114 Some people prefer to stay in the same job for the same company, but others prefer to change jobs frequently. You should use specific reasons to compare the advantages and disadvantages of both sides.
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Introduction( 20 words)
Nowadays very few people intend to go in for a life-time career. Still there
are some advantages to doing so.
Body1( 99 words)
Merits of always taking a position can be examined by three aspects.(topic sentences) First, if you stick at taking a post, all angles of the job will have appeared; after
some time,you will definitely have a good command of it. Consequently you may become
a veteran of the field and earn respect or prestige from others. Second, you can
establish an extensive social connections relating to the field, helping you tear down
most of the barriers standing in the way of your working endeavor. Finally, mistakes
of the routine tasks would be minimized because you have learned the lessons.
Body2 (111 words)
On the other hand, I would like to illustrate the advantages of experiencing different
jobs. (topic sentence) Initially, we look at the issue of bribery. Many high-level staff
are inclined to accept bribes via power in hand. However, if he knows that someone else
will soon take his place, such acts can be avoided. We then look at work motivation.
If one works for the same company for a long time without promotion, he may get sick and
tired of doing the same daily routine. Nonetheless, a manager should have qualities of a
sense of teamwork and the capability of coordination. Therefore, to try various positions
can help you gain ground to be promoted.
Conclusion ( 67 words)
In summary, staying in the same post can cultivate one to cut out for the job but involve
one in a boring career while changing jobs frequently can be both advantageous by keeping
bribery away and providing one with more opportunities of promotion and disadvantageous by
making mistakes occasionally. In my opinion, people should seek a decent and good-paid job and pay little attention to changing it.
雅思写作的四种对比技巧
介绍雅思写作对比技巧是雅思大 作文 写作中的高分 方法 ，因为使用对比可以突出主题，也可以是 文章 更为吸引人。雅思写作对比技巧在雅思大作文写作这种的应用很多，可以把对比应用在事例中，也可以应用在顺序中。
雅思写作的双边讨论型文章一直是老师和学生较为推崇采用的写作结构，除了写作题目本身出题的偏好性 —— 多以两面讨论为主，清晰的结构，多角度的思路更利于学生在较短的时间里构建出符合字数要求和题目立意的文章。但是，笔者在教学中发现，尽管一些学生在规定时间内完成了达到字数的文章，却仍然不能取得理想的分数，与其交流分析后发现，多半是对题目意图理解不够明晰，“言不对题”成为了学生的普遍弊病。许多学生对于“双边”的理解过于笼统，常常抓住题目某个字眼，简单构建赞成和反对的主体结构，或是一味认为“双边”就是“利弊”，因而导致偏题甚至离题。
针对这种现象，写作组的专家分析了近年的考题，对双边讨论型文章的架构进行了较为明确的分类，以帮助学生更好地分析题目，更为准确地构建双边结构。
一、利弊分析
Nowadays, people in some countries can choose to live and work anywhere they want, because of the improvement of the communication technology and transport. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
此类题目中常有利弊字眼，或者在指令部分提出进行利弊对比分析，常见词如“advantage, benefit, usefulness(好处);disadvantage, drawback, limitation(坏处)等”，考生只需对题目细节进行把握，弄清主旨，再构建“好处”—— “坏处”的主体部分，列举观点。
该题主要就“人们可以随意选择生活和工作的地方”的现象进行讨论，考生可多联系社会现状， 总结 利弊即可。
相似考题：
Most countries want to improve standard of living through economic development, however, others think social value is lost as a result. Do you think the advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages?
二、补充说明
Some people believe that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others think that this has little effect and other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
此类题目特点十分突出，一方面有“the only, the most…”等强调字眼，另一方面提出“other”的其他观点，细想之下，后者似对前者的补充，主体段可先对前者进行承认，但不要承认其绝对性，为后文做好铺垫，在论述另一方面时，主要使用列举法进行说明。
该题是对“如何提高公众健康”的 措施 进行讨论，首先可分析建设体育设施的好处所在，再列举一些其他有效措施，便可以达到两面兼顾又不至于偏颇的目的。
相似考题：
Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. The ordinary people can get no advantage with the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
三、对立比较
Students at schools and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources (such as the Internet, television). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
此类题目的特点是：两方面在某种层面上属于对立关系，可以分别讨论其利弊，以达到比较的效果。就该题而言，“跟老师学还是从其他资源上获得知识”是个老话题，分别讨论教师的作用和其他来源的好处，进行对比便是应对此题的最好办法，有时双方互为优劣，仅提及好处即可。
相似考题：
Some people think that politicians have the greatest influence on the world. Other people, however, believe that scientists have the greatest influence. Discuss both of views and give your opinion.
四、分类说明
Some people think museums should be enjoyable places to attract and entertain young people. Others think the purpose of museums is to educate, not to entertain. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
这类题目常让考生觉得棘手，两个方面似乎都有道理，但处理不好又会“搬起石头砸自己的脚”，前后论述自相矛盾。这个时候，如果能够对题目进行分类说明，便豁然开朗。
该题主要讨论的是“博物馆的功能”是 教育 还是娱乐，科技、自然博物馆及一些主题博物馆如杜莎夫人蜡像馆都是属于后者，而历史、军事乃至革命博物馆就有前者意义。
相似考题：
A hundred years ago, people think that human race is steadily improving in every area of life. Nowadays, there is no certainty of this case. In which areas do you think we have made important progress nowadays? In which areas do you think we still need to make progress?
针对这四种类型的分析方法，考生可利用提供的历年真题进行分析练习，做到“胸有成竹”，在下笔之前有个清晰明确的脉络，做到“事半功倍”。
一提到雅思写作模板，有人想到的是一大篇完整的 文章 ，其中有少许空缺，用来填上某个特定话题的特定内容，一篇及格的雅思文章即出炉。其实这是对模板的误解。最有效且值得初学者模仿的内容，是 句子 。我为大家分享20种经典的雅思大 作文 开头句模板。
雅思大作文模板之20种经典开头句分型
1、According to the first graph, it can be seen that ______________, it can also be concluded from it that ______________.
2、There is an interesting and instructive picture which goes like this: ______________.
3、Nowadays there is a growing concern over ______________. Many people like ______________,
while others are inclined to ______________.
4、Nowadays, it is common to ______________. Many people like ______________ because ______________. Besides, ______________.
5、 ______________, just like many other things, are preferred by ______________. While being attacked by the idea that ______________, some people consider ______________. They point that ______________.
6、Everything has two sides and ______________ is not an exception, it has both advantages and disadvantages.
7、For years ______________ had been viewed as ______________. But people are taking a fresh look at it now.
8、It has stipulated by the government that ______________. To this stipulation, many people respond actively because ______________.
9、______________ is a common occurrence in our daily life. Whatever we do, ______________ can't be avoided.
10、______________ has become a hot topic among people, especially among the young, and heated debates are right on their way.
11、Recently, ______________ has become the focus of the society, and in this way.. People swarm to ______________.
12、______________ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a lot of benefits but created some serious problems as well.
13、Man is now facing a big problem-______________, which is becoming more and more serious. First, ______________ second, ______________.
14、Nowadays more and more people are beginning to be aware of the seriousness of ______________.
15、It is only during the last years that man has become generally aware that ______________.
16、There is an old saying, ______________. It's the experience of our forefathers, however, it is correct in many cases ever today.
17、The English proverb says, ______________. This is quite true because ______________.
18、______________ is now______________, and at the same time ______________. These two factors have caused ______________. Then what shall we do to solve ______________ in the face of such a situation.
19、One of our ancient philosophers said, ______________. Chinese people have always been holding this idea to be one of their standards of morality.
20、One of the great early writers said that ______________. If this is true, the present situation should make us ponder over ______________.
雅思大作文：the old age is more valued , while in some cultures the youth is more valued
雅思大作文题目：In some cultures, the old age is more valued (valuable), while in some cultures the youth is more valued (more useful). Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
作文 范文 ：
There have been drastic and constant changes of societies and values in the global context for recent decades. Therefore, some traditional cultures regard old age valuable for their civilization whereas other utilitarian ones may deem the youth, energetic and willing to accept challenges, to more precious.
What the senior brings about to all areas is mainly experience and the sense of security to all. It is well acknowledged that the aged, whichever field they have served, have accumulated more knowledge and skills out of years practice. They may thus grasp some principles that can be utilized in guiding the next generation to cope with matters and, even having undergone modern technological revolutions, ought to be applicablein most cases. Apart from this apparent benefit, another must not be neglected. Everyone without exception goes through the aging process and it is not hard to imagine what it would be like if a society viewed the elderly to be useless and exerted little of its resources in supporting them. Nothing could alleviate the anxiety of the middle-aged and even young adults about their retirement benefits and eventually fade away the sense of security, followed by some possible increase of crime rate.
Cultures think high of the youth, however, can see benefits on social production and renovations. In the first place, the youth are generally way more dynamic, which offer sufficient labor force to carry out productive activities, and if a greater reward and respect can be given and shown to them, this force can be more active and rewarding in return. Moreover, they generally and more quickly can embrace changes in work and life. This indicates the removal of obstacles in implementing challenging policies, promoting certain businesses, developing new technologies, and boosting economy afterwards within a relatively short period.
To my mind, a justifiable government should keep the balance between the pension for the past devotion of the elder and the incentive for the current contribution from the young, to realize social justice and security.
雅思大作文：the world of work is changing rapidly
雅思大作文题目：The world of work is changing rapidly and people cannot depend on the same job or same conditions of work for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change and give your suggestions on how people should prepare for work in the future?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
作文范文：
In my country, people used to be constrained to a single workplace for lifelong by social security or welfare system. However, this is no longer the case nowadays when people are free to choose their occupation or have to adapt themselves in different positions.
People now change their works and environment based on several reasons, subjectively and objectively. To pursue a better career or break through a bottleneck, rather than secure a stable income, young people usually opt to change their job. In addition, graduates with little working experience have not developed a clear perspective of their life career. It is reasonable for them to be exposed to various workplaces, orienting to the society and trying to find out their strengths and interests. On the negative side, employers have to qualify themselves every couple of years, or else they may get fired and are forced to get other positions. This is because modern technologies have been revolutionizing since the advent of computer and internet and employers from different industries have to adopt the radically changing needs of the market. They thus must recruit those with advanced skills and specialties and cast out those left behind in order to meet the demand.
For better future career and greater possibilities of being always employed, people can take the following pieces of advice. It is certainly feasible that people exert their lifelong time in acquiring new knowledge and skills. This is especially true and cruel for the veteran workers who may find their specialized knowledge outdated comparing to that brought by the fresh and even new graduates. It is only a matter of attitude of being studious and diligent, otherwise laziness would eventually take its toll. Another piece of suggestion is to stand on solid ground before a job-hop and a promotion, which is mainly aiming at those regarding themselves already fully-prepared to get higher position. If one’s strong sense of responsibility is not fostered, maturity not or ability to tackle problems not developed, the newly-promoted will suffer from both disobedience of reports and doubts of bosses.
To sum up, the swift shifting societies offer people less chance to stay vocationally unchanged. Therefore, the path of a successful career would be more even if one is willing to tgeready and embrace.
雅思大作文：the family have a powerful influence on children 's life
雅思大作文题目：Although the family have a powerful influence on children 's life， the influence outside from home isa bigger part for his/her development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
作文范文：
It is known to people from both western and eastern world that some certain features always run within each family, unlikely to alter even after people have become independent from the original family for long. Therefore, I hardly agree with the indication that the life outside from family has greater impact for people.
Schooling and social experience undeniably affect peoplein various aspects. The most obvious one lies in the environment in whichschool students and social persons have more chances to acquire more knowledge and gain richer experience because of far more sources of input, from friends, teachers, bosses, colleagues, acquaintances and even strangers. People thus have to foster a variety of relationships and learn to cope with them skilfully. With extensive knowledge and harmonious relationships, a better development maybe maintained and furthered.
However, the family education, or parenting to be exact, turns out to be more profound and root. In the pursuit of knowledge, one has to foster habits like being able to concentrate and to expand quality attention span at the very beginning of school years. These are required by school authorities and sadly and generally realized at home as teachers can only focus on the overall performance of the class rather than each very individual. Some may argue about private sectors and that leads to the second point, the power of money. The amount of resources that one can utilize not only decide the standard of living, which may support private tutoring for better learning habits but also may formulate his or her value towards wealth, which in the long run, intentionally or unexpectedly is passed to the offspring. As well as that, children’s value towards people, right and wrong and even goal of life is deeply affected.
In conclusion, I don’t agree with the opinion that others factors influence more than family itself as the value is formed there and it can be recognized in nearly all aspects in the later part of life.